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List of spelling mistakes found throughout the fanfiction. We use fanfiction.net as a reference point and British English. Besides that it is always best to use standard grammar rules. If it's a title or proper noun, then capitalise — otherwise, lowercase. The only exception is when talking about the Gray, Light, and Dark when referring to factions.

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Book 1 Edit

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Chapter 1
He also knew the Headmaster He also knew the headmaster might be intended
doesn't make sense…. He knew  doesn't make sense… He knew  only three dots
indication with his interactions with Voldemort indication from his interactions with Voldemort
we're going to bend our self imposed rules. we're going to bend our self-imposed rules.
"How did he die in the first time-line?" "How did he die in the first timeline?"
I'd have to play a zero sum game I'd have to play a zero-sum game
by claiming the tile by claiming the title
prophecy to who ever I please, prophecy to whoever I please,
with different story telling forms and tools with different storytelling forms and tools
no apologies for head related injuries. no apologies for head-related injuries.
in the far corner of a high security in the far corner of a high-security
and revulsion on his parents faces and revulsion on his parents' faces
a bored sounding voice a bored-sounding voice
A four word sentence A four-word sentence
despite his near impenetrable despite his near-impenetrable
deliberately choose John to be deliberately chose John to be past tense
We already let John re-do the We already let John redo the
"In the grave-yard at the end "In the graveyard at the end
how he got such good grades without trying how he got such good marks without trying
Do not try to setup master Do not try to set up master separate words as a verb, setup or set-up as a noun,
not a deathly hollows style gift. not a Deathly Hallows style gift. in-universe proper noun (also spelling)
falling into he same trap falling into the same trap
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"Um… Yew? "Um… yew? not sure
It's the oldest Yew in the It's the oldest yew in the should be small
absolute right of the King to rule absolute right of the king to rule not sure
Oh… He might also have spotted Oh… he might also have spotted not sure
and aggressive with her question monologue, and aggressive with her questions monologue, not sure
of alerting Dumbledore to his presence. of alerting Dumbledore of his presence. not sure
While Diagon alley looked While Diagon Alley looked spelled wrong, source
If old man only knew. If the old man only knew. word missing?
a tiny lighting bolt killing a tiny lightning bolt killing spelled wrong
it would give him early warning it would give him an early warning spelled wrong?
"Err… Thank you, "Err… thank you, not sure
and happiness in the back of Harry's cornea. and happiness across Harry’s retinas.’ Or possibly ‘... back of Harry’s eyes’ the cornea is just the part at the very front of the eye
the comforts of the tearoom in practise the comforts of the tearoom in practice noun
They were no-where to be seen They were nowhere to be seen
the glossy paged brochure the glossy-paged brochure
"Oh no… oh shit! shit!"Oh no… oh shit! Shit!New sentence
"What if someone uses them! Oh shit! shit!"What if someone uses them! Oh shit! Shit!
some less deserving cut purse some less deserving cutpurse
07 Great British Pounds 07 Pounds Sterling (without Great British) British language use
thestral herd in the British isles thestral herd in the British Isles
a hint of smile played across a hint of a smile played across
As his finger tips wrapped As his fingertips wrapped
and aggressive with her question monologue, and aggressive with her questioning monologue,
Chapter 3
loopholes or unthought of problems. loopholes or unthought-of problems.
but decided wasn't worth it but decided it wasn't worth it
he wanted it be on his terms. he wanted it to be on his terms.
digging himself a passage way digging himself a passageway
Filling the space of the entrance of the passage at or beyond to avoid the double 'of'
It was now mid September It was now mid-September
stealing other high value items stealing other high-value items
Hell, they taught thirteen year-olds Hell, they taught thirteen-year-olds
Harry wasn't there any more Harry wasn't there anymore
a random fire ball a random fireball
detail with pin point accuracy. detail with pinpoint accuracy.
reaching down into a desk draw reaching down into a desk drawer
It was now mid October and It was now mid-October and
multi compartment, shrinkable multi-compartment, shrinkable
for early to mid November for early to mid-November
He was working to a schedule He was working on a schedule
No really?, but he shoved No really? But he shoved
Chapter 4
hidden in it's shadow. hidden in its shadow.
as a blow-him-away wind shredded his fog. as a blow-you-away wind shredded his fog.
got my ass handed to me got my arse handed to me Lord Greengrass would think ass = donkey
ill pass to the conquer of ill pass to the conqueror of
where upon I'd be rolled out whereupon I'd be rolled out
A small girl with weasley-red A small girl with Weasley-red
to shore up the rag tag alliance to shore up the ragtag alliance
by a Dark sided wizard by a Dark-sided wizard
being humoured less then thirty being humoured less than thirty
just completely over powered him just completely overpowered him
me by an eight year old me by an eight-year-old
and blood related within and blood-related within
'face my destiny,' where upon 'face my destiny,' whereupon
and chatting to his Lady Greengrass. and chatting with his Lady Greengrass.
Jacob stared after the man who Jacob stared at the man who
candidate for heir to the Slytherin candidate for an heir to the Slytherin
had died on the end of had died at the end of
with the ascendancy to the with the ascendancy of the
was blown away with a miniature was blown away by a miniature
in the middle of room in the middle of the room
Shall we retire to somewhere more Shall we retire somewhere more
morphed themselves to his new form morphed themselves into his new form
anger flowing into him. anger flowing through him.
the much worshiped Boy-Who-Lived the much worshipped Boy-Who-Lived British English
"Greengrass manor!" "Greengrass Manor!"
Noble house of Greengrass, was looking Noble House of Greengrass, was looking
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an over whelming sense of déjà vu an overwhelming sense of déjà vu
being caught in a bare faced lie being caught in a bare-faced lie
were looking at him, at though were looking at him, **as** though
"Its okay, Harry. You "It's okay, Harry. You
silence filing the hall silence filling the hall
red faced, heart leaping red-faced, heart leaping
I'm a bit better then that. I'm a bit better than that.
She looked over the boy. She looked over at the boy.
Daphne was on a buzz high. Daphne was on a buzzing high.
We've still got a ways to go We've still got ways to go
had this conversation, Okay?" had this conversation, okay?"
the other wizard's had been the other wizards had been
take the swearing in oath take the swearing-in oath
Noble house of Slytherin, a small amount Noble House of Slytherin, a small amount
As Lord Slytherin, the head of said Most Ancient and Noble house, As Lord Slytherin, the head of said Most Ancient and Noble House,
Chapter 6
"Harry's math skills are beyond A-level level." "Harry's maths skills are beyond A-level."
Her eye's flickered, Her eyes flickered,
drew out a text-book of his own. drew out a textbook of his own.
than the snails pace her than the snail's pace her
Your Mum suggested twice a week Your mum suggested twice a week
magic in their every day lives magic in their everyday lives
magics exist specificity to stop magics exist specifically to stop
to cram a lifetimes worth of to cram a lifetime's worth of
She felt she'd just been received a just received or just been given
through her all-night had been through her all night had been
"No. I'm okay. Its just…" "No. I'm okay. It's just…"
came from the trap door came from the trapdoor
who dealt in rules and logic. who dealt with rules and logic.
he'd think she were insane. he'd think she was insane.
and looked around the trunk that and looked at the trunk that
Mrs. Granger continued, Mrs Granger continued, Mrs. is American, Mrs British
Chapter 7
the shape of lightning bolt. of a lightning bolt
they did all that too you they did all that to you
to open the chamber of secrets to open the Chamber of Secrets in-universe proper noun
week from tonight at mid-night week from tonight at midnight
and those who posses the secret and those who possess the secret
and he'd asked it back. and he'd asked for it back.
and to a lesser extant and to a lesser extent
non noble halfbloods non-noble halfbloods
If feels amazing. It feels amazing.
a final disgust filled glare. a final disgust-filled glare.
Pinky of your right hand Little finger of your right hand British English
slipped the ring on her pinky slipped the ring on her little finger British English
by the sad looking by the sad-looking
couldn't take this any more, she couldn't take this anymore, she
he couldn't take any more, calmness he couldn't take anymore, calmness
never been keyed in to the wards. never been keyed into the wards.
mention such a practise mention such a practice
you don't need it any more." you don't need it anymore."
just outweighing fear of getting just outweighing the fear of getting
She was still dreaming? Was she still dreaming?
as a trapdoor appeared in the as a trapdoor appeared on the
difficult to continuing liking difficult continuing liking OR difficult to continue liking
A younger looking Mrs. Potter A younger looking Mrs Potter British English
Mrs. Potter reached Mrs Potter reached
Why did Mrs. Potter have two Why did Mrs Potter have two
"Professor!" Mrs. Potter cried "Professor!" Mrs Potter cried
A quick check in with Mrs. Weasley A quick check in with Mrs Weasley
"Yah." "Yeah."
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"Nah. Give it a half-hour. Let her "Nah. Give it half an hour. Let her British English
drab looking London town houses, drab-looking London town houses,
the buildings were gray the buildings were grey
before he'd started to chow down before he'd started to tuck in ‘chow down’ is extremely uncommon in British English, but ‘tuck in’ is very common
window-shopping the quidditch store window-shopping at the quidditch store
corners. Its wearer was owner or bearer people wear hairstyles, but they don’t wear their hair
an ornate dinning table an ornate dining table
to keep your father knowing you're here to keep your father from knowing you're here
just to get good grades in school just to get good marks in school nobody uses grades in British English
without the subject's knowing. without the subject's knowledge.
of drab looking London town houses, of drab looking London townhouses,
to start duelling practise to start duelling practice noun with c, verb with s
his shoulder length blond hair his shoulder-length blond hair
from the old London town house from the old London townhouse
its important to get it back it's important to get it back
Or cuts off you hand?" Or cuts off your hand?"
headquarters of most innovative headquarters of the most innovative
foot-shaped impressions in the ground, foot-shaped impressions on the ground,
[January, 1990 (Two [January 1990 (Two no comma
looking into the silvery-gray looking into the silvery-grey
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sisters, one born a half-hour after the sisters, one born half an hour after the British English
and was now a half-hour older than the and was now half an hour older than the British English
along the riverbank for a half-hour, and along the riverbank for half an hour, and British English
the most sought after artefacts the most sought-after artefacts
The great accounting we call it. The Great Accounting we call it. (in-universe proper noun)
two and a-half years ago two-and-a-half years ago
stories of axe wielding debt stories of axe-wielding debt
at fixed times through-out at fixed times throughout
and into a well appointed waiting and into a well-appointed waiting
crisis in the Goblin nation. crisis in the Goblin Nation.
before any age related decision before any age-related decision
in a large see through box by in a large see-through box by
curse took a lot of practise, curse took a lot of practice,
waiting for the throw back. waiting for the throwback.
red and white smoke stack, red and white smokestack,
as already half way into as already halfway into
and give him draught of living and give him a draught of living
solution made it all the more easy. solution made it all the easier.
not yet here was a snowy. not yet here was a snowy one.
pushed it through a banister, pushed it through a bannister, British English
cloak of liquid cloth spilled out. cloak of liquid cloth spilt out.
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A half-hour later, Harry hovered Half an hour later, Harry hovered British English
being heard, nor smelt being heard, nor smelled smelled also works.
from a half foot away. from a few inches away nobody says from half foot
with a fine shine of gore. with a fine sheen of gore. not sure
She collapsed to the ground." She collapsed to the ground. quotation marks not needed
lightning-bolt ring on her right pinky. lightning-bolt ring on her right little finger.
He bolted onto the grand staircase and He bolted into the grand staircase and not sure
lowered their lances, baring his path lowered their lances, barring his path
of the spiders with an over powered of the spiders with an overpowered
That would just be confunding." That would just be confounding." not sure
Half way up, she caught sight Halfway up, she caught sight
Lord Slughorn was a key-stone Lord Slughorn was a keystone
We'll now take a twenty minute unscheduled We'll now take a twenty-minute unscheduled
He leapt though the opening. He leapt through the opening.
and anywhere we could carries and anywhere we could, carries
wizard, with a full gray beard. wizard, with a full grey beard.
Chapter 11
over the red head's shoulder, over the redhead's shoulder,
Where did you run away too? Where did you run away to?
John arrived in the dinning room John arrived in the dining room
"That's right, Son." Glad to see you taking your body seriously, now. "That's right, Son. Glad to see you taking your body seriously, now." quotation mark wrong place
Can I talk you about it? Can I talk to you about it?
a small lean stake, a small lean steak,
Half way through demolishing Halfway through demolishing
had one in the last time-line had one in the last timeline
He father looked over his copy His father looked over his copy
The ink and parchment was rife The ink and parchment were rife
I was about to head into the office. I was about to head in to the office.
Chapter 12
kitchen and dinning room. kitchen and dining room.
Perhaps a friend of one your friends Perhaps a friend of one of your friends
time to meet any one? time to meet anyone?
Do you have a boy friend? Do you have a boyfriend?
John climbed The Burrow stairs John climbed the Burrow's stairs
She struggled on her bindings She struggled against her bindings
no-longer bound, but still no longer bound, but still
The twin's heads peeped around The twins' heads peeped around
and gave duel, theatrical bows and gave dual, theatrical bows
with lots of extraneous hand waving." with lots of extraneous hand waving. quotation marks not needed
like to formerly invite you like to formally invite you
the ring on her pinky. the ring on her little finger.
into her right pinky into her right little finger
She collapsed side-ways on the bed She collapsed sideways on the bed
The second-hand moved. The second hand moved.
Ancient and Noble house of Potter Ancient and Noble House of Potter
out of The Burrow next year out of the Burrow next year
vibrations on his right pinky. vibrations on his little finger.
The grin vanished. Oh, Damn. The grin vanished. Oh, damn. Or: Oh. Damn.
stroll to the leaky cauldron. stroll to the Leaky Cauldron.
He arrived in Ottery St. Catchpole He arrived in Ottery St Catchpole
cloak, and a poly-juice. cloak, and a polyjuice.
never actually used poly-juice never actually used polyjuice
Making a split decision Making a split-second decision and may want to change the ‘second’ later in the sentence to avoid repetition
—Dragons can wait. Family comes first. dragons can wait. Family comes first.
"Yes, It's me, but "Yes, it's me, but
grabbed the silver lighting-bolt grabbed the silver lightning-bolt
His skin scrapped off His skin scraped off
"Holy Shit!" "Holy shit!"
he shot off duel stunners he shot off dual stunners
the second young-man hit the second young man hit
he'd escaped The Burrow, he'd escaped the Burrow,
echoing off the inferi-filled cave walls. echoing off the inferi-filled cave's walls. as it is, it implies the cave walls are filled with inferi
directly into The Burrow's own directly into the Burrow's own
the lack of wand, the lack of a wand,
or while at the Dursleys or while at the Dursleys'
formally known as Snowy formerly known as Snowy
voice called though the fruit voice called through the fruit
that is not a hair pin that is not a hairpin
Do you have a boy friend? Do you have a boyfriend?
than in the last time-line than in the last timeline
only been a fourteen year-old only been a fourteen-year-old
could get the time-line back could get the timeline back
She collapsed side-ways on She collapsed sideways on
contained a back-up stash contained a backup stash
and two years of prison and two years in prison
A steel voice rang around the kitchen A steel voice rang through the kitchen
than first time around. than the first time around.
at down adjacent to Mrs. Tonks at down adjacent to Mrs Tonks
Mrs. Tonks raised an Mrs Tonks raised an
all the other Mr. Mrs. cases in the chapter with Mr and Mrs
Noble house of Potter. John is my Noble House of Potter. John is my
Chapter 13
Mum! Dad! We're going to be late! And you now know goblins don't like to be kept waiting. "Mum! Dad! We're going to be late! And you now know goblins don't like to be kept waiting." quotation marks missing
sign here and the house of Granger sign here and the House of Granger
deal with 'their kind.' half-blood deal with 'their kind,' half-blood comma
decapitated mess a coins toss away decapitated mess a coin's toss away
He pushed a filled out form He pushed a filled in form (British English)
contained a lot more legalise contained a lot more legalese
she was loathed to take off she was loath to take off
she arrived outside Madam Malkins Robes she arrived outside Madam Malkin's Robes
Oh, Damn. Not pureblood. Oh, damn. Not pureblood.
many of it's own customs many of its own customs
spelled out to new comers. spelled out to newcomers.
in her parent's back garden. in her parents' back garden.
lesser-known schools in the British Isles. lesser-known schools in Britain.
wand makers use different combination of wand cores wand makers use different combinations of wand cores
I had the brother wand to Voldemort I had the brother wand to Voldemort's
caster that looses the subsequent caster that loses the subsequent
It's not common wand law. It's not common wand lore.
for most of her parent's books for most of her parents' books
She leant in to him, She leant into him,
around with the awe struck countenance around with the awestruck countenance
said a middle aged witch said a middle-aged witch
hair so light is was almost blond. hair so light it was almost blond.
spelled out to new comers." spelled out to newcomers."
Obviously other wand makers use Obviously other wandmakers use
He held up his fifteen inch yew He held up his fifteen-inch yew
owing to their ability to be re-born from owing to their ability to be reborn from
known to wizard kind, known to wizardkind,
The wand maker handed her The wandmaker handed her
feel his excitement pressed against her, feel his excitement pressing against her,
The wizarding world uses dragon in The wizarding world uses dragons in
just point out that of course they'd love just point out that of course, they'd love
of them aren't well spelled out of them aren't well spelt out
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book and slid it from its brother's snug embrace. book and slid it from its brothers' snug embrace.
didn't smile back and her smile faulted. didn't smile back and her smile faltered.
"That was Okay? Wasn't it?" "That was okay? Wasn't it?"
We have enumerable treasures We have innumerable treasures
of course, and Susan, It'll be of course, and Susan. It'll be should be a dot
Alex couldn't help notice that John Alex couldn't help but notice that John word missing
toy of the Black's broke toy of the Blacks broke
What were left were the high What was left were the high
held it close to like a shield held it close like a shield ( or ‘close to her’)
clarinets, moulding into trumpets, clarinets, melding into trumpets,
feeling was were the similarities ended. feeling was where the similarities ended.
If her grand father was correct If her grandfather was correct
melted lead it's focus was so intense. melted lead its focus was so intense.
Did the box just Meow? Did the box just meow?
she grinned a marauders grin she grinned a marauder's grin
good sniff as padfoot, good sniff as Padfoot,
It's from my lord. It's from my lord." quotation mark missing
declaration, less he put your son declaration, lest he put your son
even more insane then them even more insane than them
if she'd a bit less headstrong if she'd been a bit less headstrong
about the Hogwarts express? about the Hogwarts Express? in-universe proper noun
table where to grown-ups sat. table where the grown-ups sat.
eyes to see Luna's gray ones eyes to see Luna's grey ones
and plied them off, and prised them off,
takes a decade of practise takes a decade of practice noun
It is now more obvious then It is now more obvious than
he's in his mid twenties he's in his mid-twenties
her own box shaped her own box-shaped
intro to a fifty-some year old intro to a fifty-some-year-old
was a half blood was a halfblood
Alexandra face palmed, again. Alexandra facepalmed, again.
John stopped half way through John stopped halfway through
The first born children The firstborn children
ready for the tell tale tickling ready for the telltale tickling
in another minute long hug. in another minute-long hug.
a bookmark into the same page a bookmark on the same page
heard you're still top of class, heard you're still top in class, ‘Top in class’ has more a feeling of ‘great job, you’re doing well’

‘Top of class’ feels a little bit more ‘you are superior to those lesser plebs’

It's Sirius referring to Alex. He does not feel like someone bragging in that position

a large grin forming over his face. a large grin forming on his face.
and she felt the girl wrap around her, wrapping or wrapped not sure
it's the only way isn't it? it's the only way, isn't it? comma
come down wearing a gray dress if she'd come down wearing a grey dress if she'd
her with her silvery gray stare. her with her silvery grey stare.

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in our total destruction, not our ascension. in our total destruction, not our ascension." closing " missing
tomorrow be our greatest allies. tomorrow be our greatest allies." closing " missing
in our total destruction, not our ascension. in our total destruction, not our ascension." closing " missing
rituals of Merlin have faded. rituals of Merlin have faded." closing " missing
applied her viscous intellect applied her vicious intellect
Platform Nine and 3/4 was a marvel Platform Nine and Three-Quarters was a marvel Avoid mixing words and numbers
hidden for the entire eight-hundred kilometre hidden for the entire eight-hundred-kilometre hyphen missing
Muggle repelling charms Muggle-repelling charms not sure
crossed the five metre wide crossed the five-metre wide
in an eight-hundred kilometre subterranean in an eight-hundred-kilometre subterranean
newest toy, a back-mirrored hand of glory. newest toy, a black-mirrored hand of glory. not sure
of the 19th century building, of the 19th-century building,
back on the offending news stand, back on the offending newsstand,
Harry's silver lightening bolt ring rested Harry's silver lightning bolt ring rested
Two red headed boys, Two red-headed boys,
her shoulder and onto the the table. her shoulder and onto the table. one too many
That does't mean I'm glad That doesn't mean I'm glad
He bowed to the slightly flat faced He bowed to the slightly flat-faced
of fourth or fifth year girl's arms of fourth- or fifth-year girl's arms
known the bushy haired witch to known the bushy-haired witch to
rather then befriend them." rather than befriend them."
Her tongue felt like sand paper. Her tongue felt like sandpaper.
and with the faint click clack and with the faint click-clack
For five-hundred years, families For five hundred years, families
made a double fisted jerk downwards, made a double-fisted jerk downwards,
and excited the compartment without turning around. and exited the compartment without turning around.
in six years of so called 'friendship', in six years of so-called 'friendship',
After sometime of this, After some time of this,
along the train-line's edge. along the train line's edge.
single, twinkly eyed smirk. single, twinkly-eyed smirk.
The train click clacked. The floor vibrated The train click-clacked. The floor vibrated
face with blood shot eyes and face with bloodshot eyes and
Immediately the tear stains and blood shot Immediately the tear stains and bloodshot
"Its okay, Lisa. You can do this." "It's okay, Lisa. You can do this."
That good will had lasted until That goodwill had lasted until
There was a audible intake There was an audible intake
The open-seating carriage were the most extreme. The open-seating carriage was the most extreme. Maybe you meant carriages
and was nearly at the middle of the train, and was nearly in the middle of the train,
The Gryffindor glanced to her, saw the crest, The Gryffindor glanced at her, saw the crest,
Heaven forbid someone take the Heaven forbid someone takes the
In the hand not gripping the broomstick he held his newest toy, In the hand not gripping the broomstick, he held his newest toy,
Yes he could fly without one, Yes, he could fly without one,
we would of course have we would, of course, have
"No it doesn't, Fred." "No, it doesn't, Fred."
For the last three years she'd never gone For the last three years, she'd never gone
Hopefully some of the others have Hopefully, some of the others have
before she joined Malfoy shouldn't she? before she joined Malfoy, shouldn't she?
Otherwise they wouldn't see each other Otherwise, they wouldn't see each other
Eventually the blonde gestured Eventually, the blonde gestured
Obviously she wasn't going to be in the first Obviously, she wasn't going to be in the first
Obviously Hermione wasn't going to Obviously, Hermione wasn't going to
"In this compartment we have four females and four "In this compartment, we have four females and four
"Ah, it's nothing, Heiress Greengrass." Nott muttered. "Ah, it's nothing, Heiress Greengrass," Nott muttered.
"That was friendly and cautious was it? "That was friendly and cautious, was it?
Eventually he asked again. Eventually, he asked again.
I can help you Lisa." I can help you, Lisa."
That would work wouldn't it? That would work, wouldn't it?
Eventually Lisa returned the hug Eventually, Lisa returned the hug
They did after all, abandon me." They did, after all, abandon me."
With each furious cry an overpowered spell dented, With each furious cry, an overpowered spell dented,
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"Bulsrode, Millicent."

"Slytherin!"

"Bulstrode, Millicent."

"Slytherin!"

, you will no be happy with the result. , you will not be happy with the result. letter missing
like larva through rock like lava through rock
second group all wore custom made robes. second group all wore custom-made robes.
their dark skinned comrade. their dark-skinned comrade.
towards high calorie fats, carbs, towards high-calorie fats, carbs,
If you wish to tryout for your house team, If you wish to try out for your house team,
on the third floor corridor on the third-floor corridor
corridor on the right hand side. corridor on the right-hand side.
That included the red headed twins That included the red-headed twins
"bed time — off you trot." "bedtime — off you trot."
you will no be happy with the result. you will not be happy with the result.
scrambled out of the silk sheeted bed scrambled out of the silk-sheeted bed
over an official looking parchment. over an official-looking parchment.
and one last medium sized sphere and one last medium-sized sphere
"Any one else?" "Anyone else?"
towards the black board again. towards the blackboard again.
"The system on the left hand side "The system on the left-hand side
clue them in to the power he now wielded over them? clue them into the power he now wielded over them?
into the fire place. into the fireplace.
there is more going on here then just a there is more going on here than just a
gave her his twinkly eyed smile. gave her his twinkly-eyed smile.
to sit down in the two arm chairs opposite to sit down in the two armchairs opposite
An where did yon get that?" An where did you get that?"
wife with a wide eyed stare. wife with a wide-eyed stare.
he'd fallen on a well manicured grass lawn he'd fallen on a well-manicured grass lawn
we don't have one of those hour glasses." we don't have one of those hourglasses."
into a well appointed goblin office. into a well-appointed goblin office.
A large, well dressed goblin wearing A large, well-dressed goblin wearing
and smiled a twenty-four carat smile. and smiled a twenty-four-carat smile.
they didn't even bother to enquire further. they didn't even bother to inquire further.
the image of his long dead sister, the image of his long-dead sister,
Dumbledore took off his moon shaped glasses Dumbledore took off his moon-shaped glasses
using were fourth year spells, using were fourth-year spells,
Not any more. Not with Not anymore. Not with
the core of a fifteen year old the core of a fifteen-year-old
to sink in their parents political to sink in their parents' political
had now showed his true colours had now shown his true colours
Around her the sounds of the older years's laughing Around her the sounds of the older years' laughing
travelling back over the assembled students. travelling back to the assembled students. not sure
longer. Bed was calling. longer. The bed was calling. not sure
and my parents full confidence, and my parents' full confidence,
and pointed his wand into a spot a few and pointed his wand at a spot a few
"Twilfitt and Tatting's. Nice, aren't they?" "Twilfitt and Tattings. Nice, aren't they?" source
What he really needed was a iron clad What he really needed was an iron clad not sure
fought not to look to Harry for praise. fought not to look at Harry for praise. not sure
and one weeks detention and one week's detention maybe without the 's as an alternative
he'd have the core of twenty year old. he'd have the core of a twenty-year-old.
"Well, of course I also hope it won't be…" "Well, of course, I also hope it won't be…"
but in her fatigue it came out more as a shuffle. but in her fatigue, it came out more as a shuffle.
With any luck they'd be With any luck, they'd be
Well, all except Harry of course, she mentally added. Well, all except Harry, of course, she mentally added.
Around her the sounds of the older Around her, the sounds of the older
magical exhaustion was it? magical exhaustion, was it?
Eventually the healer made her way Eventually, the healer made her way
"In public we can act as social convention "In public, we can act as social convention
Over the next seven years you will learn all the basics you Over the next seven years, you will learn all the basics you
Eventually the bottom sphere filled up. Eventually, the bottom sphere filled up.
"Although, now I think about it, "Although, now that I think about it,
McGonagall froze. "Mrs. Granger?" McGonagall froze. "Mrs Granger?"
said the now identified Mrs. Granger. said the now identified Mrs Granger.
All Mrs. to Mrs
All Mr. to Mr
Eventually she sat down and took a deep Eventually, she sat down and took a deep
Well, of course she is. Well, of course, she is.
so presumably she was still with the Grangers. so presumably, she was still with the Grangers.
"Thank you Messrs Thomas and Finnigan. "Thank you, Messrs Thomas and Finnigan.
the general transfiguration spell." McGonagall said, the general transfiguration spell," McGonagall said,
One Hufflepuff girl in particular didn't look well. One Hufflepuff girl, in particular, didn't look well.
Eventually he looked away. Eventually, he looked away.
And he knew he was beyond the top tier of power for his year to begin with. And he knew he was beyond the top tier of power for his year, to begin with.
He glanced backward to look He glanced backwards to look with s is apparently British English
it might act as to interfere it might act as to interfere
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fat and squat head of Hufflepuff house, fat and squat head of Hufflepuff House,
honour to the house of Volf. honour to the House of Volf.
down her wand and loosed a bight red stunner down her wand and loosed a bright red stunner
your nose while you breath out through your nose while you breathe out through
Daphne's lightening bolt ring vibrated. Daphne's lightning bolt ring vibrated.
save our second year duellist from dealing save our second-year duellist from dealing
all the other first year candidates. all the other first-year candidates.
died in a half strangled squeal, died in a half-strangled squeal,
There are gender specific wards There are gender-specific wards
have the wild wand waving of other have the wild wand-waving of other
sorrow is a wizard bred plant sorrow is a wizard-bred plant
A chair scrapped on the stone A chair scraped on the stone
"As an agitent, Professor." "As an agitant, Professor."
trying to get a raise out of Granger. trying to get a rise out of Granger.
I'm going to take my practise a lot I'm going to take my practice a lot
used to all this nobbyness, kay?" used to all this nobbiness, kay?"
to the third floor corridor on to the third-floor corridor on
on the right hand side, on the right-hand side,
floating in mid air just above the stone floating in mid-air just above the stone
a combination of occlumency practise a combination of occlumency practice
throwing accusations and counter accusations. throwing accusations and counter-accusations.
In front of her, harry had his wand pointed In front of her, Harry had his wand pointed
far side of the class-room by the far side of the classroom by the
The wavy haired bookworm slowly The wavy-haired bookworm slowly
leaving him open to counter attack. leaving him open to counter-attack.
Harry landed in the bench in front of her. Harry landed on the bench in front of her.
An stray incarcerous finally A stray incarcerous finally
but in the end I decided not to bother." but in the end, I decided not to bother."
"Pleased to meet you Miss Turpin. "Pleased to meet you, Miss Turpin.
"Yes and we need to find out what that is." "Yes, and we need to find out what that is."
In fact he looked apoplectic. In fact, he looked apoplectic.
Eventually John Potter burst Eventually, John Potter burst
and still the magic flowed. and still, the magic flowed.
"Oh no you don't." "Oh no, you don't."
And still it went on. And still, it went on.
Eventually it stopped. Eventually, it stopped.
It will revert at 9:00am. It will revert at 9:00 am. space missing
Sophie smile turned to confusion. Sophie's smile turned to confusion.
up the back of hands up the back of her hands
form Slytherin and Hufflepuff  from Slytherin and Hufflepuff 
Kevin Entwistle  Kevin Enthwistle  source
hand and elbows hands and elbows
gaped gasped
She swallowed an errand choke She swallowed an errant choke
She followed Harry departing figure, She followed Harry's departing figure,
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Several minutes later, Harry pocketed a last boiled egg for later, rose from his chair, Several minutes later, Harry pocketed a last boiled egg for later, rose from his chair,
seemed to be his worst case scenario seemed to be his worst-case scenario
to protect Severus from his attentions. to protect Severus from his attention.
it when he did had been a master stroke. it when he did had been a masterstroke.
and total 180 degree turn from and total 180-degree turn from
for this period of self inflicted isolation for this period of self-inflicted isolation
into the resulting secret passage way. into the resulting secret passageway.
He walked though the fidelius charm and the wards He walked through the fidelius charm and the wards
He placed it in-front of a large stack He placed it in front of a large stack
He placed this one in-front of He placed this one in front of
of fast tracking Miss Granger of fast-tracking Miss Granger
statue on the mantle piece and sent a pulse statue on the mantlepiece and sent a pulse
aged to the mid twenties of aged to the mid-twenties of
We'd hopped that Hermione would keep We'd hoped that Hermione would keep
all powerful, and alter-aged all-powerful, and alter-aged
"Welcome to the tax paying community, "Welcome to the taxpaying community,
maybe 5% raising to 15% over three years." maybe 5% rising to 15% over three years."
in his Slytherin dorm four poster in his Slytherin dorm four-poster
the place with a ten foot staff. the place with a ten-foot staff.
The box shifted and became a snuff box The box shifted and became a snuff-box
at the main entrance way at at the main entranceway at
had been a freakin' cerberus. had been a freakin' Cerberus.
cross legged in a corner, cross-legged in a corner,
He shifted on the hard wood floor He shifted on the hardwood floor
and stared at the two red headed twins. and stared at the two red-headed twins.
just like every other book shelf. just like every other bookshelf.
revelling a confined stone passageway revealing a confined stone passageway
a glance at the ward work as they left. a glance at the ward-work as they left.
very impressive for almost fourteen year olds. very impressive for almost fourteen-year-olds.
surprise of the two red heads, surprise of the two redheads,
it wasn't through our secret passage way it wasn't through our secret passageway
They stalled, mid turn. They stalled, mid-turn.
well hidden secret passageway well-hidden secret passageway
It was also clear the map took it's readings It was also clear the map took its readings
a dot with a duel label of Quirinus Quirrell a dot with a dual label of Quirinus Quirrell
pacing a far flung study. pacing a far-flung study.
their independent occlumency practise was true. their independent occlumency practice was true.
an arrogant little toe rag." an arrogant little toerag."
instantaneous build up of magic instantaneous build-up of magic
The super high-dose ageing potion took affect, The super high-dose ageing potion took effect,
his true eleven year old body his true eleven-year-old body
of a seventy year old man of a seventy-year-old man
The polyjuice potion took affect, changing The polyjuice potion took effect, changing
this time in his mid twenties this time in his mid-twenties
The beautification potion took affect, The beautification potion took effect,
now on his face, with his finger tips now on his face, with his fingertips
Maybe you disapprove of my polices Maybe you disapprove of my policies
"I think it's self serving and short sighted." "I think it's self-serving and short-sighted."
me to the short sighted bit. me to the short-sighted bit.
to protect the wellbeing to protect the well-being
They were both group based. They were both group-based.
completing the effect of a well lived in drawing room. completing the effect of a well lived-in drawing-room.
and brought it to the masks lips. and brought it to the mask's lips.
Harry woke in his Slytherin dorm four poster Harry woke in his Slytherin-dorm four-poster
where people were did they? where people were, did they?
but she has being getting advanced but she has been getting advanced
I imagine to teach someone something like occlumency would take that. I imagine teaching someone something like occlumency would take that.
nd an eighth sickles a week? nd an eighth sickle a week?
Three points in particular stood out as Three points, in particular, stood out as
After all that's happened?" After all, that's happened?"
got him going did he? got him going, did he?
Eventually she spoke. Eventually, she spoke.
Certainly a lot had changed Certainly, a lot had changed
Macavity's feathers were as gray Macavity's feathers were as grey
Later next day, Dumbledore sat Later the next day, Dumbledore sat
if the looks of the other students were to go by were anything to go by
closely moulded on the Dark Lord closely modelled on the Dark Lord
inked his Phoenix feather quill inked his Phoenix-feather quill
few minutes of rinsing off later few minutes of rinsing-off later
The young Heir had such The young heir had such
quarter inch layer quarter-inch layer
left the Slytherin first years dorms left the Slytherin first-year dorms
period of self inflicted isolation period of self-inflicted isolation
and a dong of gong and the sound of a gong or a sounded gong
By the window, perched his owl, By the window perched his owl, remove comma
The last one was a small island in the Shetlands. The last one was a small island in the Orkneys.
identical green inked addresses identical green-inked addresses
in the formally desert like ballroom in the formerly desert like ballroom
a low table already ladened with bottles a low table already laden with bottles
took it selectively serious took it selectively seriously
described as big ass stones described as big-ass stones
in front of the classes quicker students in front of the class' quicker students
through his holly and phoenix feather wand phoenix-feather wand
the cardboard snuffbox back the cardboard snuff box back
at the main entrance way at at the main entranceway at
it never paid to be too careful it never hurt to be too careful
Ohhhh Bugger Ohhhh. Bugger dot missing
just as filch comes around just as Filch comes around
almost instantaneous build up of magic almost instantaneous build-up of magic
a single magical build up behind a single magical build-up behind
to inspect his handy work to inspect his handiwork
with his finger tips with his fingertips
and hugged him as best as she could and hugged him as best she could
or laws that I've helped passed or laws that I've helped pass
the job for which he is almost uniquely positioned for. double for, remove on
uninterested in reigning in the irate girl uninterested in reining-in the irate girl
picked up his phoenix feather quill, picked up his phoenix-feather quill,
Chapter 21
the looks many of the House had been the looks many of the house had been
Chapter 25
a daughter of the house of Black." a daughter of the House of Black."
the house of Black. The bookcase the House of Black. The bookcase
Chapter 26
It made as thought to move, but A It made as though to move, but A
and across the country side as and across the countryside as
My neither, Me neither
Chapter 27
Now her lord owned the sex contract" Now her lord owned the sex contract
Chapter 28
the slot and the pride the House takes the slot and the pride the house takes
He held up contract from Volf. He held up the contract from Volf.
Of course, that was were he could Of course, that was where he could
Chapter 29
two then just two than just
As a responsibly adult, I have As a responsible adult, I have
We'll use liquid memories siphoned off before hand We'll use liquid memories siphoned off beforehand
of what we're doing, and blindfolding me of what we're doing and blindfolding me no comma
by Hermione with the ear piece by Hermione with the earpiece
, Daphne will fit me with the ear piece , Daphne will fit me with the earpiece
When step 5 starts, a new paragraph
He'd tried on one of the ear pieces He'd tried on one of the earpieces
Harry brought out the ear pieces Harry brought out the earpieces
half of the mirror ear piece pair half of the mirror earpiece pair
Chapter 30
not of the House, under threat not of the house, under threat
this close to stealing House secrets." this close to stealing house secrets."
and the light were squeaking and the lights were saying that he was going t 2 mistakes
so long as it is controlled I dear say so long as it is controlled I dare say
Chapter 31
of Britain, an Ancient House at least of Britain, an Ancient house at least
tugging at their mother's sleeves, tugging at their **mothers'** sleeves,
Chapter 32
with expert witnesses, all oh whom were Light. with expert witnesses, all of whom were Light.
Thus we intent to show how Thus we intend to show how
Given the clear and cut nature Given the clear-cut nature
Is there anyway this wand Is there any way this wand
Chapter 33
Barring the weight of his fate alone Bearing the weight of his fate alone
"How is the he not dead?" "How is he not dead?"
and spoke into the ear piece. and spoke into the earpiece.
of The Founders Club of the Founders Club
Chapter 34
The coast line was still a stone's The coastline was still a stone's
and she must to be obtained legally and she must be obtained legally
Chapter 35
He half stumbled up He half-stumbled up
that felt all together too that felt altogether too
Chapter 36
his fourth year in Ravenclaw house. his fourth year in Ravenclaw House.
Robert Longsdale — Ravenclaw house." Robert Longsdale — Ravenclaw House."

Book 3 Edit

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Chapter 37
Lady Lily Potter, of the Ancient and Noble house of Potter." Lady Lily Potter, of the Ancient and Noble House of Potter."
Chapter 38
End of Chapter Thirty-Seven End of Chapter Thirty-Eight
metal notes mental notes
Chapter 39
twin muggleborns from Hufflepuff house arrived twin muggleborns from Hufflepuff House arrived
to wear Ginny was already asleep to where Ginny was already asleep
Chapter 42
wizard hoped over wizard hopped over

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